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A perfect life or just a lie? by ~GothicDevil:iconGothicDevil:





Eyes so bright
Smile so sweet
Innocent and pure
to everyone she meets.

Loved by all
timid and shy
like a budding rose
but all flowers must die.

Forced laugh
Fake smile
hurting inside
all the while.

Pretending and lies
is all she knows
double life hidden
inside fear grows.

Comes home at night
to pain and fights
alcoholic parents
keep her up all night.

Abuse and drugs
since she was small
she's good at pretending
they don't know at all.

Crawl into bed
hear him come into her room
fear setting in
all too soon.

Feel his touch
skin against skin
she's used to it now
she lets him win.

Wake up next morning
she doesn't care
cover up bruises
like their not really there.

Conceal heavy lines
under her eyes
been up all night
hoping she'd die.

Go to school
pretend once more
try really hard
but what for?

Sick of it all
walks out of school
cant face another day
of feeling like a fool.

Goes home again
another drunken fight
closes her eyes
cant stand the sight.

Pops in a pill
what can it hurt?
it might take away her pain
of being treated like dirt.

Another and one more
soon she blacks out
her breathing stops
without a shout.

Parents walk in
ready to give hell
see her on the floor
walk away and think "oh well"

Truth still hidden
to this very day
everyone thinks
she threw her 'perfect' life away.
©2006-2009 ~GothicDevil
:icongothicdevil:

Author's Comments

This happens all the time in the world, you'll never know what really happens behind the doors of the homes in your neighbourhood, maybe the ones you think have a perfect life are the ones who need the help

I thought I might write a poem about someone who everyone thought had a perfect life

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:iconzootlocker:
Hmm, its true, and it made me think about some people I know very well :(
Its good.

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:dance:dAZine:dance:
:giggle: EDITOR :giggle:
:icongothicdevil:
At least it made you think, and maybe it'll make other people think also

I hope it didn't upset you, are you okay?

Thankyou =]

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I will always love you until the end of time, when I will never love anymore, you have my heart and I'll never have yours, I will love you until the last breath from my body. I have always loved you and I will always love you.
:iconl0stwhispers:
Hm. A couple of minor errors:

Pretending and lies
is (are) all she knows


cover up bruises
like their(they're) not really there.


I thought the rhyme was fantastic in this one. O.O The rhythm as well. Hm. Except for the third stanza. :o That one sounded a tad too short. Heh. But ah well. I still like it. =)

And hm... yea, I guess there's nothing as "perfect". -sighs- =( :hug:

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You don't know me.
So don't act like you do.
Don't ask me either,
'Cause I too don't have a clue.

... Evelyn ...
:iconzootlocker:
Mmm, let us hope.

And ofcourse it upset me, all good sad stories do :) but trust me, I'm over it.

Yousa welcome ms gothic.

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:giggle: EDITOR :giggle:
:iconpiece-of-my-heart:
omg!
that's amazing jessie!
i love it. its so sad cause its true, it happens all the time.
jo

--
What Fools These Mortals Be~
:icongothicdevil:
Thankyou, yep that's correct, people don't see what's behind the eyes or behind the fake smile that people put on

I'm glad you enjoyed it

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I will always love you until the end of time, when I will never love anymore, you have my heart and I'll never have yours, I will love you until the last breath from my body. I have always loved you and I will always love you.
:icongothicdevil:
Ah fair enough, that's good then, but yeah true sad stories should upset people because then they realise and understand what really happens in the world

Yay!!

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I will always love you until the end of time, when I will never love anymore, you have my heart and I'll never have yours, I will love you until the last breath from my body. I have always loved you and I will always love you.
:icongothicdevil:
I can't be fucked fixing up the errors miss perfect lol

But i'm glad you enjoyed it and put the errors behind

But yeah there is no such thing called perfect but people still try :hug:

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I will always love you until the end of time, when I will never love anymore, you have my heart and I'll never have yours, I will love you until the last breath from my body. I have always loved you and I will always love you.
:iconwease1:
hey hey
told you i'd read it!
sorry it took a while... stupid computers...
i like this. do you mind if i use bits of it?
with, of course, songwriting credit =D

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wake up! wake up! one day you are going to die!

i play my little part in something big

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